Saturday, April 4, 2009
Limericks
There once was a young lady from Russian Federation,
All the while she hoped for a fairer complexion,
So she wore a latest product,
And the skin become dark,
That dummy young lady from Russian Federation.
Finale: Research Paper
After getting back my draft, I feel really relief because my issue is accepted and there is only minor alteration that I have to do before send in my final piece of my research paper.
Vivaldi's Four Seasons
Visiting Malacca
The Road Home
Autobiography
Change
Unfortunately, my outline for the research paper had been rejected because there is no sense of depression experienced by the characters. So, I have to brainstorm again to find the suitable issue for my research paper. In my opinion, during the process of choosing the issue, I don’t look detail at the story and make me get the wrong issue. I hope that the new issue will be accepted later.
Metaphor
is because as a teacher we hold a great responsibility towards our students.
Bus driver also hold the same responsibility which their passenger's life is in their hand. The way they drive the bus will determine whether the passenger will arrive to their destination safely.
In class, there about 30 to 40 students and the teacher is only one who will
control the whole class. How the teacher controls the class and the students
will determine what the students will become later. If the teacher fails in
controlling their students, the students will not be successful in their
education and life. Same with the bus driver, if the way the driver drives the
bus badly, it will be an accident that will make the passengers injured or even
die. So, as a conclusion, I think I view myself as a bus driver that holds the great
responsibility towards my passengers.
First Meeting
The day had come. I am waiting for Dr.Edwin outside his room nervously. However, the way he speaks to us is totally different and I feel at ease that time. Dr.Edwin asks about the text that we chose to examine and luckily my text were accepted straight away because my friends had to change their text. Dr.Edwin asked to prepare the outline for my research paper.
Friday, April 3, 2009
My focus: Saki and D.H. Lawrence
Dr. Edwin already assigned us to our supervisor for the research paper. There are seven lecturers become our supervisors. They are Dr. Arshad, Dr. Edwin, Dr. Jaya, Dr. Ghaz, Dr. Nooreen, Dr. Syarifah and Madam Juridah. I feel so grateful because my supervisor is Dr. Edwin together with five other friends, Diah, Saipol, Raslah, Syuhada and Adha.
In the research paper, I have to identify two texts with the same issues whether from the same writer or different writer. This time, I repeat the same actions when I want to chose the text for the position paper. I bring out all the literary text that I have, from the assigned text during my foundation course to In-sight. At that time, I’m thinking of combining two genre, poem and short story but finally I decide to do two short stories.
. I choose Sredni Vashtar by Saki and The Rocking-Horse Winner by D.H. Lawrence for my research paper. The main reason why I choose these short stories is because in both stories the main character is a boy. The main character for Sredni Vashtar is Conradin and the main character for The Rocking-Horse Winner is Paul. I think that both characters share the same experience on how their family treatment affects their life. The issue that I want to highlight for my research paper is depression in children in both stories.Position Paper
Now is the time to work out on my position paper. Mr. Omit already approve my thesis statement and he also help me and gives idea to improve my thesis statement. The time that I take to finish my position paper is shorter than the process of finding the good thesis statement. In my opinion, the main reason I take fewer time for my position paper is because I am familiar with the text and I just have to express my ideas in this position paper. Mr. Omit asks us to change our draft with our friends and do the peer evaluation. At that time, I got Saipol’s draft and I think that his position paper had a good content but the way he explain it was a little bit confusing. On that day, Jessie Yong and Amanda was the person that got my draft. Based on their evaluation, I got a lot of mistakes especially because I told a lot about the story and not my stand. I feel really thankful because I can see my mistakes during that session and I try corrected it and improve my position paper.
Thesis Statement!
Thesis statement! I still confuse with my thesis statement whether it fulfill all the requirements for a good thesis statement. It took me a few hours thinking about the thesis statement and still can’t manage to come out even one thesis statement for this play. How come this task is so hard? Later I decided to go to Adila’s room and ask opinion from her. Even though at that time the clock shows 1 o’ clock in the morning and she still not sleep. How lucky. We started brainstorms together the idea for our thesis statements and finally I got my thesis statement. I can feel that the burden on my shoulder became a little bit lighter after getting my thesis statement. My thesis statement for my position paper is “The Portrayal of Kinship in “Thirty Days of September by Mahesh Dattani” Suggest That Blood Ties Put Mala into Trouble Emotionally”
Thursday, January 29, 2009
Pheewwww!
Now, I have to start figure out the text that I want to choose for the position paper. I really think that it will be easy since there are a lot of short stories and novel that I already learned and I just have to choose one of them. Unfortunately, the task become difficult because I can’t decide which text I want to use for my position paper. At first, I decide to use short stories rather than novel because short story is simple to examine. After going through some short stories that I learned from my foundation year to degree program, I still confuse to choose one of them for my position paper. I’m thinking of doing the short story “The Landlady by Roald Dahl” and also “The Matchmaker by Saki” but after going through both stories, I feel that there is no concrete issue to bring out from the stories. After a few hours looking at all the short stories and novels that may be possible for my position paper, I finally decide to choose a play from Mahesh Dattani entitle “Thirty Days of September”.
After choosing the ideal text for my position paper, this is the time to generate the thesis statement. I ask a few of my friends to help me in generate the thesis statement besides discussing with them my idea. Luckily they are there to help me because I’m actually not really sure how to make the thesis statement even though there are a few examples for reference. Finally, I manage to come out with one thesis statement and hopefully Mr. Omit will look at it and being approved by him later because Mr.Omit reject it, I have to redo it again and again.
Saturday, January 17, 2009
Second Week
Back to the pictures and the poem that Dr. Edwin ask us to find, I got the correct poem but for the pictures, it is totally rejected even though most of my friends use the same picture like me. Only a few of us got the correct pictures and one of them is Nurul Adha. I feel a bit disappointed because I got that picture also when I search it but that was not the one that I choose to bring to class. On that day, Dr.Edwin teach us about intertextuality and for Icarus’s issue, there are three works that related to each other. The works are the prose by Ovid entitle “Dedalus and Icarus”, The painting by Brueghel entitle “Landscape with the Fall of Icarus” and also The poem by William Carlos William using same title with the painting by Brueghel.
First and foremost....
However, everything becomes clear when Dr. Edwin explains to us what we have to do for this subject. As expected, Dr. Edwin includes the journal that we have to post it online. For this time, I want to make sure that I’m able to post the journal on time because before this, I always have difficulties to post my entry on time just because the wireless connection in my laptop was corrupt.
For next week task, Dr.Edwin asks us to read the story in the modul entitle “The Son of Turtle Spirit” and “Mahabharata” and also google on the net and search for some information about Ovid, Pygmalion and Icarus. I feel that this task is quite easy at first because we usually manage to find the information, but it turns out to be so difficult because he ask to search a painting entitle “The Fall of Icarus” and poem related to the painting. I manage to find the poem but I don’t know how to choose from about 20 different pictures of “The Fall of Icarus”. Lastly, I decided to choose one and hopefully that it will be the correct one. Hopefully.