Position Paper

Now is the time to work out on my position paper. Mr. Omit already approve my thesis statement and he also help me and gives idea to improve my thesis statement. The time that I take to finish my position paper is shorter than the process of finding the good thesis statement. In my opinion, the main reason I take fewer time for my position paper is because I am familiar with the text and I just have to express my ideas in this position paper. Mr. Omit asks us to change our draft with our friends and do the peer evaluation. At that time, I got Saipol’s draft and I think that his position paper had a good content but the way he explain it was a little bit confusing. On that day, Jessie Yong and Amanda was the person that got my draft. Based on their evaluation, I got a lot of mistakes especially because I told a lot about the story and not my stand. I feel really thankful because I can see my mistakes during that session and I try corrected it and improve my position paper.